If I am but without fill, then why am I so colorful?

we all have that someone who eventually comes along & colors your whole life.

I was just sitting in a world of grey,
the ground filled with cracks,
the sky had no hint of light,
then you were hidden behind a bare tree,
I turned and saw you there.
I could not speak,
so I mouthed the words,
'will you save me, young stranger?'
you just smiled and walked towards me.
Each step you took,
the sun rose,
grass grew,
and color came about.
Once you reached me,
I smiled and spoke,
"Never leave me.<3"

Reviews

[Lady Celery]

That was cute! And really, really good! I love how each step he took colored the world, that was really clever. :D
Aside from all that, I don't think you should change anything. It was all really awesome. :)
-Julia