Moonbeam

Haiku about the moon.

White orb of the night
Ephemeral and milk white
Light falls so gently.

Author's Note

As usual I really, really appreciate any opinions, good or bad. Did it flow alright, were there any issues etc

Reviews

[Doreen]

Perfectly described in a perfect form. Well done.

[Chris]

Good count and theme.

[zainul]

Light falls so gently on me too.
Very pleasing piece.