One

One person
One fear
One lie
One tear
One bullet
One gun
One final breath
And death has won

Author's Note

Short poem I made somewhere in 2005.

Reviews

[ashley]

damn. this is fantastic! the only thing i would change is to change "One final breath" to "One last breath"... i think it would flow better that way. Regardless, this is amazing! :D

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

all too soon death has one........but....