Nobody may know

I've got these feelings
But they don't show
I just pretend
'Cause nobody may know

 

Everytime you're near
My heart's all but slow
Yet I keep still
For nobody may know

 

I'm not telling
My words will not flow
I want you
Though nobody may know

 

I love you
I'm not going to lie
But nobody may know
Not even you
Not even I

Author's Note

Err... yeah..

Reviews

[Gionelly Kiss]

Hey, it was alright. Simple is good. Maybe if you want to expand your writing try looking at more imagery, using figurative language such as similes and metaphors. You used repetition and rhyme very well. Just try these tips. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing. I look forward to the next one. Gionelly*KiSS

[Coyote Poetry]

The fight to understand what we want and need leave us confused sometime. I like this poem. The internal fight in a mind leave us wishing for different decisions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[HorrorMaster]

I enjoy it :)

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

NeverSurrender this is one of the moments of indecision of our beautiful life.You poem reflects that beautifully.