Relected Light

A long distance romance shattered...

shards of glass

no, broken mirror, my heart

reflecting moonlight

the door slammed an hour ago

Reviews

[Annie S]

Love the idea that this little piece still is being intrigued by the reader.
It's enough to say that the emotions and heartbreak it has when the audience reads it
'shards of glass' love this line the rest makes it perfectly written
Keep writing :)

[Neverwhere]

Thank you for your kind words of support. I should like to say that I am happily over the person, now and have found someone wonderful and am engaged.

[Annie S]

you're welcome :)

[Distantview123]

Highly expressive, with great economy of words. Nicely done. ~ Robert.

[Neverwhere]

Thank you for the critique. When I wrote this, I could not get the words to do what I wanted at all and was pretty upset, so when I look at this now, I have trouble seeing it as being something that might be considered seriously. It's nice to have people respond to it in a favorable manner.

[Traci]

This resonates deeply tonight. Shards of glass do cut deep but in time the heart does mend.

[TL Boehm]

ouch. that's how it is with pain. We find ourselves staring at the pieces of broken. Well done.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[bobc]

N...very good. One small correction...I think it should read '...an hour ago'. Thanx...bobc

[Tim Piotrowicz]

besides the flow of this great little piece being broken by the misspell of "an hour ago" (okay there I got the "grammar-nazi" out of the way) this poem splashes a myriad of thoughts and imaginations in my mind. i hope their heart can be okay :(