Just Imagine If...

Just Imagine If...

 

Hey just imagine

With all that energy

We might once have spent

We could have lit a light-bulb

And then repent

 

But no

 

You allowed your guilt

To drive a wedge between us

And now it’s time you learnt

You can not change

Who you are

Or where the hell you’ve been

 

Nor for that matter

 

What you may or might not have done

But then just between ourselves

I sincerely mean

You can feel differently

About some of them

Inbetween

Reviews

[New Dawn]

It is the curse of the English reserve i think , that makes us hesitate rather than grab at each chance. It is easy to shoulder guilt over trespasses real or imagined. Sometimes we just need to be a little selfish and put our needs first. This was a very creative write :)

[Neville]

Your comments are very much appreciated. Many thanks & All Good Things to your Good Self, N

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Liked the start but got somewhat lost at the end Nev. AGT

[Neville]

Not the end of the world, N

[rnuff]

Such a deep intriguing write, really enjoyed this

[Neville]

Bless you Shorty, I will reciprocate as soon as I return from dropping my daughter off in town, All Good Things, for now N