Up The Garden Path

Speaks for itself in my mind at least... Wotcha mean, I'm biased?

Up The Garden Path

Like a maiden dancing free

Across many lawns of history

Searching for a younger mind

She led me up the garden path

Author's Note

Not a lot to say really, check it out though and think about it... Cheers, N

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

If someone is leading you up the garden path, or down for that matter it usually means that there is deception taking place. This sounds like an older woman looking for a stud. She told you she was searching for a younger mind? Hmm, I think she may have been searching for something else. Brevity which certainly gets the mind wandering:) Good evening Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

all water under an ancient bridge.. thank you for considering these old words Chris.
Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

I wasn't sure about this one. But it has enough intrigue to it - so, by that standard alone, this poem has served its purpose.

[Neville]

I was thinking it might read better as a one liner straight down. Ta muchly - N