Reconfigure it out

Reconfigure it out

A Poem by Neville
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You can do it if you really want.....................

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Reconfigure it out

 

There      There

Was      Was

No      No

Precise      Precise

Moment      Moment

 

It      It

Happened     Happened

Over     Over

Time     Time

 

Once     Once

She     She

Was    Was

A

Little

Girl

 

And     Now

Then    She’s

I    A

Made     Woman

Her   Fine

Mine

.

 

 

© 2015 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Stare at it for approx 45 seconds & then read it through slowly twice. Take the first letter from every second word, double the total number of words you can make out of those same letters and what have we got? Answers on a postcard to.....................................

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Error #404
Can I phone a friend?
My first is in sea but not in canoe...
You should know of such things as the ikea effect Nev, so it will come as no surprise to you that I discarded the instructions, swore a lot, kicked some things, and finally got it. Is it pink school custard? What do I win?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

6 Years Ago

F**k! I can't believe I missed that, all this time. I stared at it and f**k me, your avatar looks li.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

get outa here its pink school custard.. topiary o the mornin to ya sor..... :)



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my processing has me completely flummoxed... part of my brain just fell out of my ears and i could hear the grey matter sizzling as it fell onto my keyboard. it is important to note that I failed cutting in grade school as well as coloring inside the lines it was a huge disappointment for my parents and set a trend for many years to come. I came...I tried... I failed... I am now going back to my hutch with a bottle of scotch and a cigar and flagellate myself in front of a dictionary

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Bless ya bruvva... a much appreciated popping in... always appreciated, so you are... Have a great d.. read more
Wonderfully done....how do you come up with these :))


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

far too kind missus.. but I do like it :)
I stared, i read twice, took from there to there - chopped, added a plump garlic clove..
doubled the next ingredient, tried to convert the strudel to Bruegel and..
ohhhhh!!! that's where i went wrong.. I give up!
The morning began so gently but.. I've a headache now.
Can do the words but numbers are my bete noir.. go figure that!

Posted 6 Years Ago


honestly dear Neville I didn't try what Your note said because I liked it as it is, and how You motivated our minds with Your style, I read the end as ( And Then I Made Here Mine, And Now She's a Woman Fine.) though it can be on the other way too, but for me this is what it's all about, from a girl into a woman by Your hands, lovely my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

I am both smiling and blushing at the very same time.. tis like my face has a mind of its own.... bl.. read more
Error #404
Can I phone a friend?
My first is in sea but not in canoe...
You should know of such things as the ikea effect Nev, so it will come as no surprise to you that I discarded the instructions, swore a lot, kicked some things, and finally got it. Is it pink school custard? What do I win?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

6 Years Ago

F**k! I can't believe I missed that, all this time. I stared at it and f**k me, your avatar looks li.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

get outa here its pink school custard.. topiary o the mornin to ya sor..... :)
I like this a lot. A whole lot. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

and the very same to you Dawn et al... :)
Iam-me

6 Years Ago

cheers Neville. :)
Neville

6 Years Ago

............. am :)ing here
Would you kindly leave your address so I can mail my answer to you :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

of course.....
I'm no puzzle solver Neville and doubtless it is cleverly penned but I can say the poem itself has an endearing quality about it, sentimentally penned indeed my friend !

( tell us the answer Neville )

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Cheers Tom, I will PM you with the answer mate, just you wait and see, N
Wow, I did read this several times and in several different ways. A clever shape poem. I am not taking the first letter from every second word....sorry....no time here. I did like this though. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Thank's Lydi and no need to apologise, I don't expect everyone to follow the process outlined but he.. read more

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