Take a Long Hard Look but Don't Dare Stare

Take a Long Hard Look but Don't Dare Stare

A Poem by Neville

Take a Long Hard Look but Don’t Stare

 

 

Take a long hard look at my arse

She said

Then run back home and pray

 

 

What we have is a curious love

The rest is just hearsay

 

 

Take a long hard look at this farce

She said

Then turn around and prey

 

 

What we had once was a devious lust

She said

Hardly a single shade of grey

 

 

© 2015 Neville


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Short, sweet, and cleverly phrased -- as always, my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Appreciated as always.....N
A surprising write about physical passion! I enjoyed the twist of humour and the strategic rhyme!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Hey Circe, thank you once again, N
i had fun reading this - an in your face, no nonsense approach to love and relationships - everybody knows where they stand in other people's hearts

regards,
steph

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear steph, it is always a pleasure to hear from you....N

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..