Welcome to Oblivion

Just a few words slung together to express a fleeting philosophical opinion

No

I

 

No

Me

 

No

Us

 

No

We

 

It

 Seems

 

You

Are

 Now

 Entirely

 On

 Your

Own

 

Welcome

To

Oblivion

 

Author's Note

Check it out. Opinions always welcome. Cheers, N

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Hmmm....thinking about this one. Two people who once were one and now are totally separate...in different realms of the universe. Staccato lines are very effective. So different, Neville. Lydi**

[Neville]

Much appreciated my dear literary friend Lydi. All Good Things, N

[Einstein Noodle]

a fine meditation says i! Oblivion could never be more positive ;)

E.

[Neville]

Howdy stranger, many thanks as always

[Einstein Noodle]

we all know how hard it is to keep up! and your certainly welcome ... the form you gave this is also nicely chosen i think ..it is pointed to the outcome in a physical way ..

[Neville]

You my good friend have again just made my day.....N

[highonwords]

i feel the total disconnection and separation between two people in the poem - a very sad write

steph

[Neville]

Again, your stopping by and taking a few moments to consider these words is very much and truly appreciated my new literary friend.... All Good Things, N

[highonwords]

you're welcome, neville

regards,
steph

[Neville]

Well thank you anyway my fiend steph................N

[Circe]

I feel like the force of your words pushed me out of orbit.. in a good way it leaves you out in the open space!

[Neville]

Oh' wow, you just made my entire day Circe. Many thank you's are blowing towards you x

[Lyn Anderson]

oh, man -- I wish you were here to banter with me. I have written a few of these -- simple, succinct, cutting, that's that, in the bin, and so, we begin, again ...

[Neville]

Thank you KLGoode, your time, your insight and your opinions are always welcome, N