How Far Do You Really Want to Go

How Far Do You Really Want to Go

A Poem by Neville
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Just a bit of fun She said, that's all....

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How Far Do You Really Want to Go

?

 

How far do you really want to go

He asked

All the way if you don’t mind

 

She casually replied

 

How do you want to get there  

He enquired

Oh’ very very slowly

 

If you would only be so kind

 

Are you really sure

He asked

Yes absolutely certain

 

She shuddered and she sighed

 

However if you have the time

She said

I would be eternally obliged

 

At least

Until we meet again my friend

 

If I could be untied

© 2016 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Aw come on, it made me chuckle when I thought of it.........

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You are such a tease Neville. Good evening, and now back home after our week in Brixham.

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Hope you had the time of ya life Chris....many thanks for the visit and I s'pose I am...Night night.. read more
Chris Shaw

7 Years Ago

Yep, you're a tease. Night Neville x
Neville

7 Years Ago

Night............x
My question is How far will you go...lol. This was witty and erotic and made me smile. Headed to the store to buy some rope!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

am sitting here and smiling too now my friend... bless ya........ N
The end is definitely a treat.
Surprising the readers with wit, is one of the rare qualities a writer can posses. Well, you have it!
Kudos!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Bless ya my fine young literary friend, I very much appreciate your kind consideration of these word.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome! :D
What an awesome ending. Yes, it's a chuckle indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Cor blimey, much appreciated, as blooming always...N
I liked the sweet conversation between the two.. it was nice reading it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Delighted that you stopped by and shared your views.....All Good Things, N
Dr. YumnaKay

9 Years Ago

It was a pleasure. :)

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Added on November 24, 2016
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..