What We Have Here

What We Have Here

A Poem by Neville
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An idea, a few words & that's it folks

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What We Have Here

 

What we seem to have here

Is a solitary reminisce

 

If you don’t get it

Get over it

 

Have a laugh

Don’t take the piss

 

What we seem to have here

Is a Poet Tree

 

If you can’t climb it  

Embrace it

 

Don’t hang around

 

What we seem to have here

Is high moral ground

 

Dig a hole for yourself

Or get out of it

 

What we seem to have here

 Is a cliché 

 

Go round it

 

Fin

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© 2016 Neville


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I loved this - the whole tone of the poem - the gentle rebuke ' if you don't get it get over it' the sage advice 'if you can't climb it embrace it'.
I imagined myself walking through a boulevard of poem trees not judging but simply embracing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

I loved your comment. Thank you so much ND you just made my morning......All Good Things N
"What we seem to have here
Is a cliché"
Interesting thoughts here! Made me think..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

If I have made you think dear YumnaKay, I have achieved something worthwhile today. Many thanks & Al.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

9 Years Ago

You are welcome, Neville! It was a pleasure 😊
ahahaha ..it is what it is ... feeling a little angsty are we?! ;)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Indeed I am my friend & thank you as always for considering these words.....N
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

:)............. makes me smile my friend

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Added on December 14, 2016
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..