The Way it Was
A Poem by Neville
The Way It Was
With
Head
Bowed
Low
He
Knelt
To
Kiss
The
Hem
Of
Her Pleated
Skirt
Only
Then
Did
She
Smile
Down
From
Her
Mount
And Drag
His
Name
Through
The
Proverbial
Dirt
.
© 2017 Neville
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Bitter as this is, it made me laugh, so thank you. :)
Is the unique layout intended to convey the proverbial finger to the lady?
Original and very well done. I hope she reads it!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you for considering these words. All Good Things, N
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8 Years Ago
Indeed they must, unfortunately. You're welcome.
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Added on May 14, 2017
Last Updated on May 17, 2017
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NevilleGone West folks....., United Kingdom
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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over ..
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