When There Is Nowhere Else

When There Is Nowhere Else

When there is nowhere else

I prefer to lose myself

In an empty room

With indecent thoughts of you

Smelling of vineyards

Wintergreen and baby oils

As free as any virus

With nowhere and everywhere to go

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There are places, spaces, scents and thoughts that remove the ordinary to make dreams come true. Maybe indecent, maybe magnified (not magnetised) by the way the mind works but oh so easy to touch when lost in a bubble of need. Perhaps. If only that virus was as accessible as wintergreen and baby oil!

[Neville]

I concur... many thank you's emmajoy....N

[Chris Shaw]

In an empty room there are no distractions so you are alone with your thoughts and free to travel anywhere your mind cares to take you, even if you have nowhere physical to go, the world could still be your oyster. That wintergreen is something else. Intoxicating smell of pine, fabulous for a massage, as is baby oil. I can only imagine the smell of vineyards. This is a very sensual piece of writing.

Chris

[Neville]

Thank you Chris... Neville

[barleygirl]

Very imaginative! I've been there & yet your words pick up on some unusual details I've never seen or heard before. I love the way you do that (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Bless ya Margie, don't they say the devil is in the detail........Neville

[Lydia Shutter]

"with no where and every where to go!" YES! Thoughts are like that...fantasies we can lose ourselves in and then write about. I like your style. LydI**

[Neville]

Bless you too Lydi** as always appreciated....Neville

[Cassie]

I hope you write those thoughts down, do you

[Neville]

No, they are just between you and me, it's a secret Cassie..........N

[Cassie]

hahaha...a secret...oke

[DIVYA]

As free as any virus
With nowhere and everywhere to go

A very interesting read this was.

[Neville]

Glad it caught your attention