When Haiku Calls

Not a lot to say really....

When Haiku Calls

 

Take deep breath and sigh

The sound and form of haiku

 Shall beckon poets all  

Author's Note

These words came to mind
from somewhere out the blue
while feeling just a tad haiked off.....so what else could I do.... Will or Shall is the question.....

Reviews

[lightsong]

I must say that this is very well written three lines with a strong message and it flows with a wistful tune, You shell and will write more Haikus my friend :)

[Neville]

Again, you are far too kind my friend but I sure do like it.........N

[barleygirl]

As interesting as your poem = comments below title & in author's not!. It's rare for any idea to hit me in so few syllables, as focus is not my strong point! *wink! wink!* I love how this describes a subtle inner sensation rather than some outward flashy imagery, as much haiku does! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Cheers Margie, as always, much appreciated my lovely.....nug, nug...N

[Anise]

I've always thought that there's something that fits every mood.
Longer poetry is an exciting adventure (if it's done well) while shorter pieces ( i am very find of) are like mini brain vacations that allow us to breathe and ponder. I liked your haiku.

[Neville]

Thank you Anise, much appreciated..........Neville

[Anise]

You are welcome Neville, it was my pleasure

[jacob erin-cilberto]

clever piece...they are not so easy to write...shorter is often harder...
but syllabic-ally speaking, you have conquered the form, explaining the form.

[Neville]

My word jacob, I really am most grateful to you for such a glowing review............Tis truly appreciated, I can tell ya ...Neville