Captivating Games

Captivating Games

 

I

Want

 To be the kite

At the end of your string

 

I

Want

 To feel like a hawk

Making love on the wing

 

I

Want to be that colour

Over there without a name

 

I

Want to be a player

Without playing silly games

 

I

Want to be your

Prisoner with shackles and no shame

 

Not too much to ask for surely

 

Reviews

[Aurora]

A lot of people start that way in relationships

[Neville]

they do indeed and where do they go from there I wonder.. many thank you's for checking in and taking a peek my fine new literary friend...

Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Shooieee-honestly open and out there- wonderful- love the part about shackles and no shame- the depths of true love to which it can go and be so innocent yet so powerful- wonderful words coming straight from emotions into words🌹

[Neville]

Thank you kindly Kelly, you are so very kind and always appreciated, I can tell ya..... Neville :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure is mine🌹

[Neville]

am gonna thank you again.. just because I can... :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And u are welcome🌹

[Wild Rose]

I want to sit out in the sun with a cool beer

I/we could go on and on with our wants couldn't we

[Neville]

Darn reet we could, or should that be darn write we could......Darn socks tho is more likely.......Cheers Wild Rose tis much appreciated my friend........Neville

[barleygirl]

One of the best of yours I've read in awhile! I have to admit, I prefer the ones that are a little longer & more in depth (like this one), becuz sometimes your very brief ditties leave me hangin'! *smile* I love the way you carefully craft each distinct idea (for each stanza) into a thought-provoking moment of clarity. This displays your quirky, loveable, palpable playfulness (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

I like it when you admit, you rascal and bless ya little cotton socks.....Nug ya..........

[lightsong]

those little tiny sweet things which give a relationship more sweetness, more excitement... the kite at the end of Your string :) that's so very lovely, like You are her "dream catcher", the clolour without a name... that's a one really magical line, wanting to be the special like no one else to her, and want to give what no one else gave her... Your young heart is shining here :)

[Neville]

You have just penned the most magical review...thank you so very much..........Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

What an honest declaration of love!
How can she not give you her heart on a silver platter now?
"I want to be a player without playing silly games" that is the perfect statement of a gentleman and a true lover.

[Neville]

my head on a platter more like....Hiya my friend thanks and hope you are well.............N

[Mrudula Rani]

I am fine thank you. The photo is absolutely beautiful. Abraço

[Neville]

blushes here....................Abraco too..

[sette]

I

want

to feel like a hawk

making love on the wing -- this could really be challenging..lol.. thanks for this beautiful writing

[Neville]

You can do anything if ya want hard enough....thanks for the view....he said as he gazed down from the clouds..........Neville

[sette]

will go for it...lol

[Neville]

send me a post card when you get there.......

[sette]

i definitely will

[Ardra]

Heheh beautiful N. :)
No it's not at all .... just small wishes isn't it .

[Neville]

Small wishes, now is there such a thing? Mine are all used up anyway.........Bless ya Ria..........