That Secret Place

More than words.....

That Secret Place

 

Oh’ my secret love

As I kneel at your feet

My love

Pray take me to that secret place

Where I might be complete

 

Oh’ my secret love

Let me taste your secret taste

Let me feel your secret heat

Take me to that secret place

Where I might be complete

 

Oh’ my secret love

Your secrets safe with me

My love

I shall be discreet

Pray take me to that secret place

Where I might be complete

 

 

Author's Note

We have all got such a place.....but keep it to yourself

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Life can be very ordinary without having a spot where we can hide and strip off the obligations, to dance amongst the possibilities *wink! wink!* Keeping things under wraps is the only way to go, since the magic will evaporate under scrutiny *sigh!* fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Take it from me, the secret is to keep ya eyes tightly closed and just imagine... works every time...Cheers Margie.... sigh's back at'cha...... N

[Donna]

Your exactly right...you must keep it to yourself. I like that.

[Neville]

Sshh.....its a secret......but thank you so much all the same......

[Lydia Shutter]

Elegantly sensual and deliciously suggestive....great write. Lydi**

[Neville]

Why thank you dear Lydi** just made my day.......N

[Mrudula Rani]

Secret place, a place for solitude? A place of solitude holds peace and contemplation, if it holds love as well then your secret place is complete.

[Neville]

Such fine words, it would be easy to steal them....quick write some more fine poet........

[Mrudula Rani]

You inspire me with your finest words my friend.

[Neville]

Now that is good to hear.....now go and get writing....N

[lightsong]

This could be a very sweet song my friend, it rang in my ears like that, with a lovely nice tune, a secret place that each one of us has, but it's not the same secret place for all of us... yes I better keep it to my self alone, only to me :)

[Neville]

Probably a very wise decision my friend...thank you so much for the vote of confidence.. hum that tune all day long and go happy......Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but in some cases the secret love and the secret place will never make us feel whole...there will always be the guilt...and that takes a chunk out of our heart.
j.

[Neville]

I shall dwell on that and get back to ya....cheers jacob...