When Does Trust Kick In

When Does Trust Kick In

A Poem by Neville
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Revised to the very point of newness....Many thank you's to those dear friends out there for the prompting... You made me think about the error of my words... tis much appreciated.....

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When Does Trust Kick In

 

Pray tell me

Where and when

Do you think

Trust kicks in

Might it by chance

Be forged within those

Secret midnight trysts we plan  

Or from these

Most treasured of all

Lacquered truths

Or might it be from the very

Sweat we shed

And skin on skin

Or from that

Single moment when

Eyes first meet

And gazes lock

Unsteady hand

A gentle sigh …

Post climax wave

Then aftershock

Pray tell me

When does trust kick in

?

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
I wanna put this one to bed now.........

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Well there are many answers to this one Nev, depending on who you ask. So in summation, it could be the beginning of those secret midnight trusts, if remembered fondly, when hell freezes over if not remembered so fondly, or when hell freezes over if its some of your audience now reading this on here.
Some, not all though.
😃


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

Hey Loz,
I am delighted you came down here and alighted .. not only that tho' I am grateful t.. read more
Lorry

1 Year Ago

I finally remembered I had a voice. Now all I have to remember is the ever so easy task of rememberi.. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago


its like riding a wotsit .. ya neva forget .. perhaps🙂



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Wow. Amazing work. Great question. I think it's when we let our guard down.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I fear I let mine down once or twice too often .. cheers tho Thomas .. Neville
Well there are many answers to this one Nev, depending on who you ask. So in summation, it could be the beginning of those secret midnight trusts, if remembered fondly, when hell freezes over if not remembered so fondly, or when hell freezes over if its some of your audience now reading this on here.
Some, not all though.
😃


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

Hey Loz,
I am delighted you came down here and alighted .. not only that tho' I am grateful t.. read more
Lorry

1 Year Ago

I finally remembered I had a voice. Now all I have to remember is the ever so easy task of rememberi.. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago


its like riding a wotsit .. ya neva forget .. perhaps🙂
I don't know when trust kicks in... but Trust can also be disarming and lead to making the wrong decisions as well... If you find out the answer will you share it with me?? Nice question of thought in the write, thank you for sharing Neville..


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Hey, I do so welcome your visits...thank you Ghost.....N
from the start when you love someone there is trust attached. then depending on both parties on how to carry the relationship sometimes trust was kicked out and it will be a hard thing to bring trust back in.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Maybe you might have something there my friend....thank you so very much for considering these words.. read more
sette

7 Years Ago

based from experience my friend as always

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Added on April 10, 2018
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