No More Words

just words.........

No More Words

 

No doubt there shall be

those who drown

In these words of yours

Or at the very very least

They shall lose themselves

and freely so….

 

But go now love

Sshh no more words

They are not needed here

though silence is

The like of which

Has not yet been heard….

 

Death quiet

if indeed death is

Oh’ can you picture

greater bliss

Than a dance in the rain

and a poets kiss….   

 

And now dear heart

Place a finger  

against the knot

Your lips make

When you say goodbye…

 

For now at least

I fear your story

should remain untold

Those wanting words

must wait a while

But one day shall be sung and loud….

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When silence overcome love. What is next Neville? I liked the tales and the questions in the words. Love can be a chess game. Hard to win and easy to lose. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Neville]

Many thanks for taking time out to check in Coyote .. always so very much appreciated .. Seasons best to you & your gang my friend .. Neville

[Lydia Shutter]

Just like the old game show said, "It's not what you say...It's what you don't say!" Stories have a way of coming out even if no one is forming the words to tell them. Good one. Lydi**

[Neville]

my father used to say the same thing .. thank you Lydi**

[Thomas W Case]

Wow, just wow! Brilliant work, my friend.

[Neville]

Cheers Thomas .. Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Some times speaking words can reduce the intensity of the lovely moment. yet silence speaks volumes. What a romantic writing

[Neville]

You are absolutely right about those silences Mrudula....and thank you so much......Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

My pleasure entirely.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's almost like the speaker is saying...sing your song somewhere else...i have heard it too many times...and the words aren't real...not falling for that tune again...my speaker is shut off, i cannot hear you anymore....and don't want to.

[Neville]

okay, I hear ya jacob cheers...over and out...N

[sette]

as always my friend nice piece of writing, so dramatic, so creative and so expressive

[Neville]

thank you again sette.....thanky very much....

[sette]

you are most welcome

[Ken Simm.]

Many, many great things herein Neville. This meanders as it should, I feel and flows over the rocks of young love with just the right amount of ache and pathos. Excellent work.

[Neville]

You are far too kind and I thank you for it........Neville