The title drew me and the poem hits the mark.
We all relate to poems in different ways and sometimes when we read, our mood, can affect how we interpret. But a good poem is not necessarily about perfection of a style, with perfect couplets and quatrains, meter and rhyme. It's about that little nugget that jumps out at you and makes you feel something. I like this poem of yours :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
not as much as I enjoyed reading the delightfully insightful and reasoned review you left for me my .. read morenot as much as I enjoyed reading the delightfully insightful and reasoned review you left for me my friend........................cheers indeed....Neville
VERY very true! and I say wonderfully smart my friend! written with Your own style, more than words? more than inking? YES and YES, it's about the feelings... the rhythm from the heart and/or the mind into ours, the ability to caress one's heart, mind, thoughts, emotions, senses... and when that rhythm flows purely, and when this is done perfectly, it always HIT home!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
you are far too generous for words and I sincerely thank you for it......... Neville...
think about it..... come back when you have... no rush.................All Good Things, Neville
7 Years Ago
I must have misread this poem when I initially read it because this poem is beautifully written and .. read moreI must have misread this poem when I initially read it because this poem is beautifully written and true. That alliteration, for some peculiar reason, puts a very hard lump in my throat. The soft 'h' being repeated in words with such strong meanings, this really is beautiful. Thank you Neville.
7 Years Ago
Hey.... thank you you my friend......................N..