Broken Promises

Even telling the truth can get ya into a whole heap of trouble, just mark my words.....

Broken Promises

 

Later that day

On an unmade bed

 

                     We made promises

                      We knew would not keep

 

              Then making out

              Till exhausted

 

We eventually

Fell into each others souls

 

                               Yet not once

                               Did we submit to sleep

 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Who needs the sun for heat when there are poems like this! Only ten phrases but a tome results. Methinks this should be its title: 'Fell into each others souls' Bossy me!!. Thanks for sharing

[Neville]

I am so glad I did... will maybe think about your suggestion... and thank you ma'am ... Neville x4 T's and hold the sugar..

[emmajoy]

Suggestions are as free as the sugar!

[sette]

and that is what i called love making with more love than lust

[Neville]

thank you kindly sette..... N

[sette]

my pleasure

[Ghost]

Making promises we cant keep seems to be the norm in life... If only we could make a promise and keep it then things would be better... If only? Thanks for sharing

[Neville]

tis true enough.........ta my friend... Neville x4 T's no sugar

[lightsong]

I read Your words few times, and I think it's the first time I read these feelings like this from You, so tender, so passionate, so warm, endearing yet so sad... promises made in a moment of deep connection and bonding, they are made real, sincerely in that true and real moment, how later life might turn them, we don't know...

I love this my friend, it feels my heart both with warmth and gentle sadness.

[Neville]

You are far too generous and kind my friend and I sincerely thank you for it.... Neville

[Wild Rose]

Unmade bed ??

Who really care > Make just as you get in - to unmake during your love making > One promise you kept

[Neville]

thank you for the kind visit Wild Rose tis appreciated..... N

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

“Fell into each others souls”- passionately, alas, too impetuously?- c’est la vie. In the heat of the moment we whisper white lies and sometimes, sometimes, live to regret it. But the memories of unmade beds are ours to raise a glass to, forever. Well-done Neville!

[Neville]

How very blooming true, but tis not just beds now is it.... let's both drink to that ......... Neville

[Ardra]

Don't they say promises are made to be broken... something like that...
If a eventful night with your lover is worth the missed sleep ....
The way you write it....falling to soul.....Then I think it was worth more than the sleep.... we can sleep next day... or night ...what if we miss it isn't it... :)

[Neville]

Thank you Rapunzel for your insight, understanding and consideration of these words... much appreciated... Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Sleep might bring nightmares that have to do with unkept promises...and those can be quite scary.
j.

[Neville]

As always jacob you hit the mark and I thank you for it.... N

[Chris Shaw]

Making hay while the sun shines, love making can be exhausting. You would have paid for it though through lack of sleep the following day. We've all been there at some time in our lives, and what a lovely memory of energetic days.

Chris

[Neville]

If I can serve as such a catalyst then I am both fulfilled and replete.......phew... Cheers Christine....Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Good evening Neville.