Always & Forever

Always & Forever

 

Forever in

your shadow

Wherever shadows lay

Forever in

your depths

As deep as they might be

 

Forever in

your depths and debt

For all eternity

What more

might a slave possibly want

discounting freedom 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

How lovely is this, and I missed it first time round. Makes slavery sound quite attractive.

Chris

[Neville]

Thank you our Chris much appreciated & true :)

[Neville]

you are very kind sette & I thank you for it.....N

[sette]

such a romantic poem and maybe in fantasy it does exists but somehow it can also be real

[Neville]

thank you dear friend.. I some how missed your comment until just now.. apologies x

[lightsong]

I think dear Neville many of us want to be that kind of "slave" ;) for a moment, always, and forever... You always say the things as they should be in Your own style of mind, and it's always something interesting to read.

[Neville]

I am near delirious with praise & gratitude my fine literary friend & true..... Neville

[Ranger Kessel]

I am intrigued. Vague and descriptive at the same time. That is a rare talent my friend. I appreciate the post very much.

[Neville]

Thank you Ranger....... N

[Ranger Kessel]

very welcome

[Mrudula Rani]

" What more might a slave to love possibly want ...." sounds much beautiful!

[Neville]

Bless you my friend, always welcome and always appreciated....... N

[Mrudula Rani]

It is always a wonderful treat reading these gems of yours.

[Neville]

I am blushing and true..... N

[Butters]

Awesome. Vague and descriptive at the same time. This could be interpreted many ways making it appealing to a large audience.

[Neville]

Well as if butter would not melt in your mouth, you are a sweet talker for sure... Many thank you's for being so quick of the mark and too kind for words..... Neville

[Butters]

Lol, you’re welcome