A Tear in the Sky

just words.. choice words tho...

 

A Tear in the Sky

 

There is a tear in the sky

 Where the tears seep through

 

A whole in everything

No room for part of anything

 

That’s precisely

Where the love creeps in

 

My words but heavily influenced by the great Leonard Cohen

 

 

 

Author's Note

no note for reviewers ...

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

That is exactly where love seeps in, no matter how carefully we've tried to batten down the hatches and keep it out.

[Neville]

How very true, cheers & make mine a double..... N

[¿]

Just words are just great here...this read reminds me of a saying that keep the doors and windows open of your heart...may happiness peep through...or unfortunately may gloom! But here the tear work just amazing!! Thanks for sharing😊!

[Neville]

You are very kind.. many thanks for visiting and considering these words..... Neville

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome😊!

[Neville]

Then I am blessed, bless you too Tahsin.Z..........Neville

[¿]

((Smile))..!

[Neville]

smile on................ N

[Chris Shaw]

This is lovely Neville and reminds me of something Leonard Cohen wrote. We all need love to survive. On holiday in Brixham, so not much time to review at the moment, though I will try my best. Happy Bank holiday.

Chris

[Neville]

Ah yes, there is a crack in everything, that is where the light gets in.... great words indeed... thank you Chris and have a great holiday........ N

[Chris Shaw]

That's the one Neville. I'm a big fan of Leonard Cohen. Having a great time although a mist has descended this evening and I can't see anything:))

[Neville]

not even where the light gets in... how lovely... enjoy.........N

[Chris Shaw]

There is a tear in the sky where the tears seep through. Those words tell me today, that where there is great love, there also comes grief. You don't know how strongly you love until you have lost it. Second reading, new interpretation.

Chris

[Neville]

Then I am doubly grateful and true.... Neville