Mr Angry

Mr. Angry

I can’t remember exactly

When or what it was that

Made me feel as angry as

I feel right now

Maybe it was when that bully

Big John thingy

I can’t remember his last name

Pushed me over in the playground

In front of Mr. P that pervert priest

Who carried me on his shoulders

Or rather bounced me as a kid

To choir practice twice a week

For two whole years before I got wise…

 

Now that made me mad I can tell ya

It made my mum and dad mad too

He is still serving time I might add

Or was it when Pam told me

To leave because of my infidelity

When she was screwing around St Tropez

Wow I really thought that unfair

And she did too but still did it

Or maybe when

I failed to get that locum job

In Lancashire but the girl

In the white mini skirt did

She even came on to me

During our introductory tour…

 

I remember every one of those

Interviewers was a different shaped

Grey haired fella with a belly and thing

For white mini skirts

I was never into them myself

Preferring them long flowing hippy things

No it was not that I’m sure

Yet despite so many other things

That have happened since then

I am so very angry at the moment

I really can’t remember

When or what it was that last made

Me feel this blooming bad….

 

Reviews

[...]

I like this language very real. Like somebody talk to me on the street. You express you angry in very precise on form each line have power to keep reader focus and let him feel how you are feel. This is feel great even reading loud well done.

[Neville]

I thank you my friend, much appreciated... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Whoa, I can feel your anger and I just know it's gotta be something big, because the other things from the past aren't bloomin molehills, there are some mountains in there. Also your last line emphasised the strength of your anger with a choice expletive. I bet there have been a few more under your breath as well. You certainly conveyed your present emotional state Neville. All I can say is, sorry you feel this way.

Chris

[Neville]

You are very astute Chris.... cheers N