Just a Tick in Time

Just a Tick in Time

A Poem by Neville

Just a Tick in Time

I wish I knew
What makes her tick
I know she tocks too much

© 2018 Neville


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If she reveals what makes her tick
She would't be tocking any more
It's the mystery that she wants you to keep guessing!
Dear Neville, Your brilliant gems are inspiringly beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Now ya tocking................N
Mrudula Rani

7 Years Ago

With you it is always so easy and always a pleasure tocking!
Neville

7 Years Ago

Bless you M, you always say the very nicest of things..... Neville
there is the mystery in the tocking side, because even if these are just words flowing from her mouth, it still is full of meaning

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

thank you sette, what a delightful observation and thought...... Neville
I liked this one. Women are mystery and wonders. I'm old and I know little about what women really are thinking. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

and I thank you for being you, my brother.. a much appreciated visit... Neville
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend. Have fun and be safe.
Neville

7 Years Ago

Cheers John, will try, I have got to catch a plane later today, so fingers crossed..... Neville
Nice word play. Made me giggle. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Good to hear, at least I have achieved something positive today....... All Good Things, Neville
Oh my this is funny. I don't know whether it was meant that way, but that's how it came across. Tocks and talks, sounds very similar

I know she talks too much

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

There ya go, spot on... more astute than the queen of stutes you are & true.... Neville x
Chris Shaw

7 Years Ago

laughing my head off
Neville

7 Years Ago

....................Be careful then x

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Added on June 27, 2018
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Neville

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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..