Dear Avatar

not just words, just a bit of nonsense

Dear Avatar

 

I

Just

Checked

 

To

See if he

Was here

 

He

Was

Not but

 

I

Might

Just add

 

You

Were here

Up there in that

 

Dinky  

Little square

Right on top of me

 

Hey

Certain on line poets

Make my day

.

Author's Note

dont believe everything you read but laugh as often as you can... N

Reviews

[lightsong]

You know? I don't totally know how Your mind works, but I do love how He does, giving us such sweet amusements!

I LOVE this one, even Your note ;)

[Neville]

I'm not sure how my mind works either, but he thanks you for drawing his attentions to something of a longstanding mystery......am glad you took note of my note....... Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

Cryptic yet straight forward? Is that a thing? I think so. Making my day.

[Neville]

I think so too, and mine, bless ya.... Neville

[sette]

you always write something that brightens up my mood thanks my friend

[Neville]

you just made my day, thank you ... Neville

[Ghost]

You are always bringing something to the cafe that is either amusing or inspirational or something that makes one think... Thanks for sharing all with us.

[Neville]

You are far too kind by half dear Ghost but I thank you for it....... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Certain on line poets( like the ones that are on this page now) make my days... I carry their beautiful words all day with me. I hope you are having a beautiful weekend my friend.

[Neville]

Nice to hear M... Not too bad really, am off out in a tick and thank you again........... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

It's always a pleasure, N.

[Neville]

Same here........... x

[Chris Shaw]

I'm going to give you a saucy reply. I have seen many on top of me, many beneath me and all while I am searching for others. I also check out who is online lol. Good morning Neville. I like your wackiness, your lines always make me think and often make me laugh at their originality.

Chris

[Neville]

Well now, that's one of the most original chat up lines I've heard all morning... ta Chris...... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Couldn't help myself, but seriously, it is lovely to check and see who is on writerscafe, because, those people that you interact with and share our love of poetry can make a huge difference. Many on here make me laugh and smile and that is all for the good.

[Neville]

Who is gonna disagree with you on that, smiling is good too........ N

[Chris Shaw]

Have a lovely day Neville. Scorchio again.

[Neville]

Goreshto, or a very hot day много горещ ден as we say in Bulgarian x

[Chris Shaw]

Scorchio, with a difference. Are you fluent in that language, or do you just know the basics to get by?

[Neville]

I speak it reasonably well but would not say fluent...not by a long chalk... my wife is not so good but can read the Cyrillic far better than me, so we make a good pair when out and about.....Nevski

[Chris Shaw]

That's team work, working at its best. I can just about remember my school girl french, but I do think we Brits are lazy when it comes to learning languages

[Neville]

Yes, I agree.. I find it quite offensive and arrogant..Te ava dobre den moya priatelka.... most probably spelt incorrectly but the thought was certainly there...N

[Chris Shaw]

I certainly believe it you are spending much time in another country or live there, you should learn the lingo. It's important

[Neville]

Darn right it is, at least give it a try....

[emmajoy]

I am, do.. will, one day, more than.

A cleverness in flight, Mr Pettitt: your words can be somewhat engimatic at times, but they make amazing sense - eventually

[Neville]

I suspect it may have something to do with the interpretation placed upon them, rather than intention... maybe...... Thank you my Friend.... Neville