That Certain Something

That Certain Something

 

There will always be

That certain something

 

Regardless of how

Fast or loud we dance

 

Or offer prayers
That certain something

 

Will remain

Smeared be it vibrant

 

Indelible both on and

Against our smoky

 

Crystal walls of perfect

Shame...............

 

Yes my love

There will always be

 

That certain

Certain something

 

Whether or not it

Races or it lingers

 

It is made now

And shall never go away

 

Reviews

[sette]

yes the bliss but sometimes accompanied by pain of an eternal life

[Neville]

Reminds me of that Queen song.. Who wants to live forever... cheers sette.. N

[barleygirl]

What I see in your message is the eternal struggle of human against his/her own base desires. As humans, we are so egotistical, we want to be well-thought-of . . . yet our base desires keep pumping this low-level temptation into our veins . . . such that we scramble to resist or cover-up. That inescapable something = the temptation plaguing our nasty inclinations *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

tis those base desires.. they get the better of me every time... oh' those nasty inclinations eh' Margie.... wink, wink... Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

A love that shouldn't have been but was anyway. What was done cannot be undone and sometimes never goes away

[Neville]

Reminds me of one of my poems.....Cheers Lyn..... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

I am picking up on something that has been destroyed, and yet it lingers. And it does so with feelings of regret, but the love still remains despite everything. Perhaps this is about two people that have behaved badly towards each other and one of them is expressing guilt. Whatever it is, I am feeling a whole lot of emotional baggage here, crossing a wide range of different emotions. And I think it is coming back from the past to haunt. Over to you Neville. On a range of way out, maybe, getting closer, warm, hot, how did I read this?

Chris

[Neville]

Maybe very hot.. maybe icy cold.. for the life of me I can't recall becuz I'm so very old...actually, not true.. this was scribbled not that long ago.... N

[Chris Shaw]

You aint giving much away there are you? Somehow I think we've swopped chairs. It's me do the analysing. How funny is that?

[Neville]

I like it that way round...... N x

[Chris Shaw]

:))) ...............

[Neville]

..........:))