Tell Me

No kidding....

Tell Me

 

Tell me

Are you

Frightened

Darling

Pray tell me

What it is

You’re thinking

Tell me

Are you

Scared

By any chance

My love

As you lay

There sprawled

And shaking

Next to me

Like a fallen

Mourning dove

Then whisper

To me

Sweetheart

Through

Wisps of golden

Hair

As here and now

We lie naked

On this

Parquet floor

Trying to make

Some sense of

Light

Escaping

From our one

Cracked mirror

As limbs  

Knotted and glisten

In a thousand

Splintered reflections

Still yet to become

Memories

And I beg you

Tell me how it feels

 

 

 

Author's Note

Go for it.........

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

sad eerie, melancholic but a riveting read.

[Neville]

sounds like the story of my life.. cheers Andrew sir, you got me all worded up now.... Neville

[Ardra]

Some how this has a eerie feeling to it...

Mmmm not a lovey dovey feeling...a mourning dove.... she seems to be completely broken....still the question of how she feels.... some how seems ironic.... that's what I could make out of this ( :) not sure if that's what you meant)

[Neville]

It all adds to the spice of life... thank you Ardra... N

[Mrudula Rani]

With So much concern you question her! ... all the moments of love and despair eventually become memories and strengthen a relationship! Wonderfully sensual writing, dear Neville.

[Neville]

welcome back my dear and luvverly friend... this old fella has missed ya.....thank you too.. Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Obrigada meu querido. I missed reading your wonderful writings. Uma abraço bem apertado.

[Neville]

Bless ya M and true...

[Chris Shaw]

Do you know Neville, I got an overwhelming sense of sickness reading these lines. Wisps of golden hair, sprawled on the floor and fear. Fighting to live, that is what came into my mind. The cracked mirror? Bad luck. Oh my goodness this hit home big time.

Chris

[Neville]

written so quick, his hand became a blur, her face yet still, perfect... cheers Chris... N

[Chris Shaw]

Good morning Neville. Ah, her face yet still perfect, now you have taken me somewhere else entirely. Out of one nightmare into another :)
Chris

[Neville]

Good Morning Chris... and thank you for visiting..