A Would Be

Haiku.. a real one...

A Would Be

 

A would be and nothing more

is all I can be

Just an old guy passing through

Author's Note

substitute dream for guy.. they both work, although I no longer need to...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes Neville. We do become the old guy. But the old guys still can have some fun. Hello from Michigan and I hope you are doing well. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Neville]

................ thank you most kindly my friend ... .....

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

Good morning Neville. Both of them work well. ( Not so much of the "old guy" though!!
All an attitude of mind.)

Chris

[Neville]

chuffed to bits, I am and true... Good Mane Chris..

[Chris Shaw]

Blimey, two years older eh? That makes you positively ancient then. Same answer as before, it's all an attitude of mind. Cut the old out and substitute it with mature or suave :))

[Neville]

dont ya think mature sounds a bit cheesy .. and I cant hear the word suave without thinking of that Elvis number Blue Suave Shoes ...
:)

[andrew mitchell]

Classic lines Neville and they both work!

[Neville]

you got me all smiling, this Sunday mane sir.. many thank you's indeed... Neville