Always Wanting More

For someone who was once, just a little bit special & whose 12 string Eko Ranger, I now admit, I left on the tube...

Always Wanting More

 

She wanted more

Than he could give her

He said he’d heard it all before

 

Deep joy is so unforgiving

She would have loved him to the core

 

He wanted more

Than she would give him

She said she’d heard it all before

 

Deep joy is so unforgiving

He would have loved her to the core

 

Had they known

What each was thinking

They might have loved for ever more

 

Fin

 

Author's Note

Cost me a small fortune she did....

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

The morning is cold in old lovers eyes....don't ask me what this means Nev. for I'm sure you already know...or it wouldn't have asked me to spit it out before my coffee was finished :) Happy Monday with no regrets. I've just seen a butterfly..so off for another..

[Neville]

Thank you ever so CQ ...catch them gently, kiss em and let them go.... N

[Einstein Noodle]

so few lines and a large part of lives unfold ..well done ..hit me square in the eye balls ... i think "deep joy is so unforgiving" is an incredible line .. i want to read V5 L3 as ".....ever more" ;) women and men can learn a hell of a lot from each other can't we....:) this one probably has a lot of names written in it ...nice one sir!
E.

[Neville]

I really can't thank you enough for visiting these words & yes, I think we can and certainly should learn from each other.. V5 L3.. I dig that version too and might just amend accordingly.... Cheers Gene my friend.... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

All your writings are based on your experiences Neville? What a wonderfully complicated and interesting life you lead my dear friend ( No wonder you are always brimming with poetry!).

[Neville]

Days long gone but still often fondly remembered my dear Friend.... and thank you so...

[Mrudula Rani]

Poetry worth memories... great reminiscing!!! uma abraço

[Neville]

that is what a lot of it is about these days, not all of it, but a lot... thank you dear M.... N

[Ken Simm.]

Your work causes me to nod knowingly quite often. As in been there, done that. I doubt if I could put it as eloquently.

[Neville]

I have absolutely no doubt you could, but wanna thank you for the kind thought behind the idea of it... Have a great day Ken...... Neville

[Ardra]

Mmmm if we could read minds life would be better Or maybe worse lol
Maybe real selected hearing capacity when in dire need of understanding ..
Would do the world a lot good...

Sometimes .... can't toss a coin and decide

[Neville]

Cor blimey missus, have ya ever thought about writing a text book on the peculiarity of individual human perception and cognition.... what a swell idea and thanks so much for visiting.... oh' just remember there are those who toss coins and sometimes win, while there are others who toss themselves off bridges and always lose everything....Neville x

[Ardra]

Mmmm :) mmm tossing is not a good idea.... coin nor self...that's what I have learnt over the time... but from time to time I tend to do them...not off the bridge though.. :))

[Neville]

good to hear.... N

[Ardra]

I am afraid of heights.... :p....I get dizzy....then I don't need anyone's help to fall lol

[Neville]

........... :) me too.. had to get rid of all my heels..

[Ardra]

I avoid them ..... last time I got into a very messy situation after that I am very careful only when my dress it too long and I am too short I use heels ;)

[Neville]

me too... :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, but can we ever truly say we know what the other is thinking? I might be a little inexperienced in the whole love thingy but I feel it never is a balance. One always love and compromises more than the other, while that other takes it for granted which is what keeps the 'relationship' going. Idk, just sharing my thoughts.
Human nature though, always wanting more than one can chew lol interesting read and write. Certainly made me think :)

[Neville]

If I made you think at all, and you considered the nature of love and the impact of wanting.. then I am more than satisfied.. many thanks for visiting... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

You left her 12 string EKO Ranger on the tube and have only just admitted it? This pair seemed to be on the same page, but not speaking a language that the other understood. It's called communication. My diagnosis? Too much loving and not enough talking :)

Chris

[Neville]

It only had 11 strings when I lost it.. she always wanted more.. true story, thanks Chris... N