Breaking Bread

Breaking Bread

A Poem by Neville
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Crumbs.. Nev's on a roll....

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Breaking Bread

 

As you live and breathe in your

World I live and breathe in mine

 

Yet the distance set between us

Marks empty space and time

 

Tho since you have your life ahead

And mine is hanging by a thread

 

Come my friend and break some bread

Before I have to leave you...

 

 

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
No bread was harmed during the breaking..... N

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Two friends saying goodbye and performing that most ancient of rites...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Bless ya steppenwolf, I must say I much appreciate you visiting and you are always welcome... N
steppenwolf

7 Years Ago

OK! I'll be back...S.
Neville

7 Years Ago

you are more than welcome..
I read this as though you are romantically involved and the distance between you and your lover is almost unbearable you can't live without her but she can live without you. Am I reading too much into it probably .

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

I dont mind how you read it, I do appreciate the visit very much though and thank you for it...Nevil.. read more
A farewell request? I rather have you a long, long time... (repairing that thread then taking leave) however far the distance is ... the poetry keeps us connected!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

7 Years Ago

Thank you Neville. Endless phone calls home is leaving very little time for anything... (every one .. read more
Neville

7 Years Ago

I want to know too...
Mrudula Rani

7 Years Ago

Eu sempre digo... você é uma doce amigo, Querido!
I love the aroma of freshly baked stuff....
I tried my hands at making bun once ....it turned out not so successful.... so I have given it a rest will try sometime soon....
Make I can bake you a cake instead :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

I will let ya know.. but keep a jar handy, just in case I turn up out of the blue...
Ardra

7 Years Ago

Nah we don't keep it in jars ...it's freshly made as and when required.... :))
Neville

7 Years Ago

keep some freshly made handy then..
I'll break bread with you Neville anytime. Long as you provide the red vino as well. A poem in couplets, and the message? .........................The message doesn't sound very appetising.

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

red it is then.... cheers
what we havin' Nev. ? Rolls, biscuits, bread w/cheese, bread w/oil, you pick..I'll bake!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

bread with cheese & or oil would be great.. cheers

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Added on October 1, 2018
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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