Before I Go

what started out as a haiku ended up as four identically worded but differently arranged sets of words on the same otherwise empty page.. we call this a quadhaiknev and if ya believe that.....

Before I go

I want you

 

So please

Promise me

 

The next time

I can have you

 

 

Before I go I want you

So please promise me

The next time I can have you

 

 

Before

I

Go

I

Want

You

So

Please

Promise

Me

The

Next

Time

I

Can

Have

You

 

Before I go, I want you, so please, promise me, the next time, I can have you

Author's Note

ya could call it experimental, I call it messing with words... aint it wot we do...

Reviews

[Crowley]

I like this....crafty, clever and a little desperate, just how I like my women...lol!!! Look at you getting all artsy and craftsy, this worked out really well. Great job!

[Neville]

cheers mate, but what you after eh' ... :) N

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Aw Nev...you sly dog you...messing with words...pfft...messing with emotions...now there is a motive!>
You heart stealin' mind messer!(smiles..wink)

Ps.( there was no potential mind messin' heart stealin' harm with the writing of this comment )

[Neville]

okay.. so bring on the bread

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

oops! I ate it :):):):):):):):):):):):):):0

[Neville]

I aint pitta...........