Looking For Nothing

Looking For Nothing

A Poem by Neville
"

sometimes its there, but ya just dont see it....

"

Looking For Nothing

 

Although almost

Perfectly blinded

I am looking for

Nothing

 

Just feeling

My way through

The rest of my days

 

Not looking

For pity

Not feeling

Your pain

 

I told you before

I am almost

Perfectly blinded

 

And refuse to play

Those silly games

That you play

 

 

 

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
being blinded by the light, dont make it any better...

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Sometimes one can be blinded by just pure acceptance of a situation, that numbness, maybe surrender maybe by defeat, or maybe it doesnt matter any more. A thinker thanker of a write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

then I'm gonna thunk ya for being so kind... Seasons Best Andrew.. N
andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

you too Nev
Neville

7 Years Ago

........ :)
and I thought we were having fun Nev....(inserts wicked smile)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

we were... (inserts a stupid grin)...
well crafted catharsis- sharp and subtle edges!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

I am truly blessed.. cheers my new literary friend :)
Alistair (Ali)

7 Years Ago

Haha!!..No worries, Mate!...tis a pleasure!
Neville

7 Years Ago

tis a pleasure shared then, and true..
I was blinded by the light yesterday for about ten seconds while driving in the full glare of sun. I found it really scary not seeing where I was going. However I think you have your compass set and you are following it in your own way, not expecting too much, just living which is what we do. Best ignore the game playing if you want to stay happy. As I've got older I've become an expert in avoiding the grenades of life. Good morning Neville. Happy Saturday :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Good advice, gratefully received, and serving to reinforce some of my firmly held pre-existing belie.. read more
Chris Shaw

7 Years Ago

Nuffink wrong with your beliefs. They are sound :)
Neville

7 Years Ago

Thanks Chris :)
Its always best to look for or expect nothing, its not so disappointing if it arrives. All we can do is fumble blindly and avoid game playing at all costs, especially blinded, as it could be an apple she throws for you to catch, but it also could be a grenade.
Well written my friend, hope you make it in one piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Its the apples that scare me.. but thanks for the tip, cheers Lorry.... N
Being blinded by light is worst, we are left with vast emptiness.
Sometimes it's there and we don't see it because we are searching for the whole picture not just the object that created the illusion.
Dear Nevill, you can put experiences in to words so perfectly and make us see and feel it vividly! You have a beautiful gift my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

what a delightful sentiment, and he thanks you for it, so he does and true... N
Mrudula Rani

7 Years Ago

Querido, It's always a great pleasure reading your thoughts . Abrações.

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

228 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 2, 2018
Last Updated on November 2, 2018

Author

Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



About
Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..