Puppy Love

Puppy Love

A Poem by Neville
"

feeling haiked off.. coz there might just be some truth to these words..

"

Puppy Love

 

I really thought she loved me

It was the salt though

That old girl licked the most

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
just in case you were wondering, the c is meant to be exactly where it is... between the sky and the shore line...

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And they call it puppy love. Song again, Neville. None other than Donny Osmond. That's the first thing that entered my mind as I read your title. Then reading your lines, all I could see was an old dog slobbering away at your face, while you screwed up your eyes and nose :) Is that a fact that dogs lick your face to taste the salt on your skin? And as for your author's note, of course the sea is meant to be exactly where it is. As is the c in Chris. It has to be at the beginning. Good ridiculously early morning Neville. Up again at 4.30am

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Blimey our Chris hope you can catch a few zzz's later.. Yes tis a fact.. in this case my dog Brulee .. read more
Chris Shaw

7 Years Ago

Will have to ponder further :)
Neville

7 Years Ago

wander freely and enjoy :)



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Kitty love is exactly like the puppy love you described, Neville. Our prince grabs and holds my arm and gives it a good licking. They do tell us how much they appreciate ( the salt) us don't they? What a heart warming writing my friend. Loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

how lovely is that... so good to hear and yes, dont they just.. give Prince a tickle under the chin.. read more
Mrudula Rani

7 Years Ago

He is all stretched up beside me and I will give him your tickle. Please do give lucky Brûlée .. read more
Neville

7 Years Ago

Bless ya M..... x given.. N x
You are too young to remember, Christine, I guess. Listen to this one :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NAtwI2poXXg
The original song--by Mr. Paul Anka--back in 1960. Donny Osmond must have been, what, 1970-something.
When I was a kid, I remember my cat(Arthur) licking my face, and my dad said the same thing. He licked my face often, with his sandpapery little tongue, but he did, I must admit, seem to do it with greater alacrity that time.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

cool song that... cheers angel and yeah.. I reckon our Chris is far too young...
And they call it puppy love. Song again, Neville. None other than Donny Osmond. That's the first thing that entered my mind as I read your title. Then reading your lines, all I could see was an old dog slobbering away at your face, while you screwed up your eyes and nose :) Is that a fact that dogs lick your face to taste the salt on your skin? And as for your author's note, of course the sea is meant to be exactly where it is. As is the c in Chris. It has to be at the beginning. Good ridiculously early morning Neville. Up again at 4.30am

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Blimey our Chris hope you can catch a few zzz's later.. Yes tis a fact.. in this case my dog Brulee .. read more
Chris Shaw

7 Years Ago

Will have to ponder further :)
Neville

7 Years Ago

wander freely and enjoy :)
this is so cute.
I have a dog and every time I think he's kissing me my son tells me that's it's just that he likes me salty face
I guess I taste good

your comment about the c and the sky and shore have me wondering at a deeper meaning though.
puppy love, young love - it's a sweet thing for sure whether between people or animals

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Glad you can relate to this Ana.. not only that.. am glad you checked in.. in the first place.... N
Papaya

7 Years Ago

I was happy to do so. ~ A ~
Neville

7 Years Ago

................... :)

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Added on November 9, 2018
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