Very Nearly Bad

experimental aint the word I'm looking for..

Very Nearly Bad

 

When she has had her fill

And sucked him dry

Do you think she will simply lie

 

Lie back

And think of me or England

 

No

No chance

 

She will more than likely run and hide

To avoid the penalty she imagines

You might impose

 

You think

Yes

I think

 

When she has had her fill

She will no doubt pay the price she knows

That she once pledged and therefore owes

 

Yet I think not

Or maybe you are write

She is not all bad tho

Just almost

 

Author's Note

but it is kinda...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

"She will likely run and hide."The she here sounds scared of consequences.I can't help thinking this is going to end in tears. If she's been a bit bad and she's been found out, I wouldn't want to be in her shoes. Your opening stanza, well what can I say about your opening stanza? Your lines often full of intrigue Neville :)

Chris

[Neville]

ssh dont say anything.. maybe I might just get away with it... cheers Chris :)

[Chris Shaw]

She is almost imperfect, but not quite.

[Neville]

perfectly put & just the way I like em.. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thought you might like that :)

[Neville]

Veni Vidi Vici.. I came eye sore, I conked out... N

[NotUsinganymore]

Very intersting poem. It had a great opening too!

[Neville]

that's good then.. thank you for taking a peek, tis appreciated.. N

[Robert Trakofler]

awesomeness! I love your use of words and your ballsy cadance. (I'm glad i'm not the only one who dated her, yet somehow i might lack your generosity)

[Neville]

thanks for checking in Bad bunny.. yes.. I understand she did get around a bit, but that was a long time ago now and I struggle with grudges.... All Good Things to ya sir.. Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

There are degrees of bad, from naughty to downright wicked. She fits somewhere close to nearly not bad; that is good is't it?

[Neville]

That's the best.. thanks M x

[Mrudula Rani]

You are most welcome, N.

[Neville]

.........thank you again x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like that...
not all bad tho/ Just almost---

i guess we are partly to blame when we get mixed up with the heartbreakers...after all, our naivety is something WE pay for...others usually don't

j.

[Neville]

you are a genius sir and I thank you for it... N

[Lyn Anderson]

I am especially fond of price she thinks she owes. Because pledges, of course, are a two way street and sometimes what might be owed isn't when the street never ran two ways in the first place. Just sayin'

[Neville]

is that why ya have to look both ways when checkin what ya owed.. just chequeing.. ta x

[DIVYA]

Not all bad seems interesting. She knows the score. Good for her. I like the way you portray her. Very contemporary.

[Papaya]

Being a little bad is ok. Just depends on what's at stake and who, if anyone, gets hurt. Fine poem.

[Neville]

nothing wrong in with a little experimentation in my book... Many thank U's Ana:)

[Papaya]

Nothing wrong. I agree.
You're welcome. :)

[Neville]

..... :) N

[Papaya]

I decide to take the train to work today instead of drive and I'm reminded of why I usually drive. I believe the man next to me may have experiment with a bit too much whiskey a little to early in the morning. That might be good example of bad experimenting. It's only 8am here. Anyhow. Have a nice day Neville :)

[Neville]

Wow.. that's Breaking Bad.. safe journey home :)