Trust is a Five Letter Word

two for the price of one ... take my word, you can count on it...

 

Trust is a Five Letter Word

 

I

Thought

I might be

More subtle yet

To keep our secrets

In a colour coded alphabet

Whatever it might be my love

We have certainly not found it yet

 

 

I

Thought

It might well be

Intriguingly more subtle

To keep those sweet secrets

Of ours in a covert coded alphabet

Whatever the case might be my love

We have certainly not found that lost key yet

 

Author's Note

oh yes ya can....

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Oh no you can't. We are in pantomime season Neville and the shape of your poem is very much like a Christmas tree. Well two Christmas trees to be precise. Two for the price of one as you have said. Trust is indeed a five letter word. Your lines are full of intrigue. Secretive, coded messages and lost keys. Your readers need to be sleuths to decipher. There is also a nice play on words in the second tree :) This is undoubtedly a Neville thing.

Chris

[Neville]

tis there tho.. one just needs to look hard enough... thank you our Chris... N :) x

[Chris Shaw]

I will look harder then at this cryptic puzzle :)

[Neville]

sometimes we just have to move on.. be careful (lol) no more clues :)

[Ardra]

Beautiful :) hey
N.
Ah trust is to be earned and once lost....then hard to gain....
Lovely poem... And like Chris said it does look like the Christmas tree....:))

[Neville]

I wonder whether that was by chance, or not .. bless you Ardra my friend and Seasonal Greetings :) N

[Ardra]

Merry Christmas and a very happy New year...... sending you lots of love and warmest hugs.... :)
read moreMerry Christmas and a very happy New year...... sending you lots of love and warmest hugs.... :)
You are such a wonderful soul!

[Neville]

and back at ya x