Moving on Maybe

Moving on Maybe

A Poem by Neville
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I am saddened by my friend Lorry leaving the Cafe but sickened by the cause....

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Moving on Maybe

 

Some rejoice

While some

Are shattered

Your mirrors cracked

My fish is battered..

 

© 2019 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
you know who you are.. as I do..

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Our playground will not be the same without Lorry. I love his wacky sense of humour, his punchline poetry and his mind wandering reviews. I sincerely hope he reconsiders because he is going to be sorely missed by his mates here. He knows who his mates are.

It is a great pity people choose to leave because of bad behaviour of others
Thank you Neville for your poem. I like battered fish too. Squeeze of lemon and tarter sauce on min luv. save the vinegar and newspaper for someone else.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you our Chris... yes.. a damn shame... N



Reviews

In the dark some seem to be. Who was it that upset thee? Dare one ask or forever be the mystery?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

There are many here who miss absent friends.. in particular those who have felt the need to leave be.. read more
kitty

6 Years Ago

Shame that. Bullies everywhere eh! You ought to have self defence - in words that is but ah...too la.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

one can but try.. thank you
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Not only Lorry...but there are many who are harassed by that or those cons creating animosity and pungent relations among many writers.....I received a hate mail few days ago and was about to leave this arena...but John said that this way the evil will win...so can't bother for those creepy texts and we should keep ourselves united....I wish Lorry comes back here and keeps writing....
Thanks for sharing this poem...tis so so truly penned!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie

6 Years Ago

I second the notion that we need to unite.
Neville

6 Years Ago

thank you Cherrie..
Cherrie

6 Years Ago

What we do need is a grievance system of some kind. No one should be driven away. Or get hate mai.. read more
well sir...i guess i can live with a distorted self image as long as the fish are battered .. beer battered that is... as for the rest ... i don't have a dog in that fight ...Lorry never did nuttin' to me ...i have enjoyed his reviews and his poetry ...i think the terrible trolling that went on long ago now ..has left some bitter seeds ... a sad sad refrain i'm afraid :((( i am grateful having been unscathed by all that .. other than missing those who have gone .... with the exception of the trolls of course ... who are actually very easy to handle .. i don't respond ... i report .. and block ... the end
with that i say ... big sighhhhhhhhhhhh and down yer neck buddy! ;)))))))))) pass the fish!
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Good on ya Gene & thank you .. fish is on its way.. :)
Our playground will not be the same without Lorry. I love his wacky sense of humour, his punchline poetry and his mind wandering reviews. I sincerely hope he reconsiders because he is going to be sorely missed by his mates here. He knows who his mates are.

It is a great pity people choose to leave because of bad behaviour of others
Thank you Neville for your poem. I like battered fish too. Squeeze of lemon and tarter sauce on min luv. save the vinegar and newspaper for someone else.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you our Chris... yes.. a damn shame... N
I think he will come back, maybe not so soon, but I feel he will. now You stay around and keep writing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

I seriously hope he will reconsider.. bless you my friend.. hope you are well :)
lightsong

6 Years Ago

I'm well, I hope You are, now sending You a smile too :)
Neville

6 Years Ago

thanks G.... :)
I hope lorry reconsiders his decision and comes back to write again. I have always loved his reviews and poems. Jacob is right, we need each other to support and encourage with our words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Absolutely.. thank you Mrudula my friend x
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

I know exactly how you are feeling my friend. Let's hope soon things get better.
Neville

6 Years Ago

Amen to that my fine friend N x
i was really enjoying my interactions with him...
sad on a site like this that anyone would feel forced to leave...
poets need one another...not that many people understand us.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

You are absolutely write jacob and in more ways than one... it is a sad day indeed.. N
I too am saddened by his leaving.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

I am sure there will be many more Cherrie it is indeed a bad day for the Cafe..... N

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