Let’s Call That Day a Week

it has been one of them days... I maybe should have called this retro

Let’s Call That Day a Week

 

I am sure

I won’t be here

For long

It seems your love

Has all but gone

 

Let’s talk about sex

Let’s talk about

A state of mind

Talk about out of date

Let’s talk about sad decay

 

Let’s talk about fantasies

Let’s talk about you and me

Let’s talk about his n hers

Let’s talk about hot n cold

Let’s talk about young n old

 

Take it from me

Babe

Let’s be young

For maybe

One more day

Let’s call that day a week

 

 

Author's Note

we could always vote on it....

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A day remembering the past. There's alot to talk about. Many things to relive, Many memories. Maybe much water under the bridge. I am thinking that there is a desire here to be young again. A desire to linger not just for a day, make it a week. A day to remember how things used to be before the years diluted the excitement. That's where you took me Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

I imagine a journey traveled by many our Chris... I was having one of them moments when words flowed faster than I could hit the keys... I always both appreciate and enjoy how and where ya take me with me own words :)

[Chris Shaw]

That is the beauty of poetry Neville. Once you put it on the page, the reader can interpret your words exactly as they want to :)

[Neville]

..................ah.. that's better.... ooops :)

[Chris Shaw]

:))................. Does that need itching, scratching or summat else?

[Neville]

............ Ha ha... very good :)

[Mrudula Rani]

A beautifully crafted invitation to reminisce and to stretch the day to week and talk. Talk about all those things that will rejuvenate souls!

[Neville]

That's the reason I'm on a mission.............. :)

[Mrudula Rani]

Wonderful to hear that, and as far as I am concerned you have accomplished the mission, my friend .

[Neville]

thank you M... mission accomplished :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the last line...call that one day we put together of remembrances of us a week...and that one week we will call the past no matter how long it was...as we both move on...
and eventually feel a year removed from what was between us.
j.

[Neville]

thank you so much jacob for taking time to check and consider these words.. another welcome and much appreciated visit..... Neville