Flawed

Flawed

 

You may never know

How often I opened your

Page and looked down

On you from above

Posing naked like that

From the waist down

 

Was he really that damn good

Or just another trick you turned

I remember that check shirt tho

Unbuttoned as it was just far enough

To reveal the gentle cleft

Between those small breasts of yours

 

I may have even once

Just called them buttercups

No hint of a smile though

Just a quickie for the cameraman

Did he tell you to sit like that I wonder

With your knees so well parted

 

Your mother never sat like that

But then you know that don’t you

Hey I never knew you had so many

Piercings you never told me

But then why should or would you

 

Is that check shirt you wear

Mine or his and is it blue or black

It’s hard to tell in Monochrome

For certain

Did you steal or borrow it

For the sake of modesty or art even

 

Whatever I just love the way your

Eyebrows arch and finger combed

Still loose hair falls over those shoulders

To reveal a near invisible scar behind

Your left ear and which makes you

Not quite so perfect after all my dear

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Every one of us is flawed in our own way. Some sadly more than others. We do not always understand why some people act the way they do, why some people will sell themselves cheaply, why some have no moral compass whatsoever. It is not for us to judge them as we have not walked in their shoes. There is good in everyone if you care to look. Your non judgemental side shines through here. I am sure she was very beautiful and it is apparent that you cared about her.

Chris

[Neville]

I am certainly no saint and far from perfect.. thanks for reminding me our Chris.. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Xcuse me while I just buff up my halo :)

[Neville]

reminds me of one of my oldies Should You Ever Need a Halo............ consider yourself excused.. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Too funny :) You must post it.

[Neville]

maybe..... :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

flawed in body and in heart...but perfect...yes, sometimes i think actual "perfect" is so boring...
but those scars, moles, transgressions...they all make up perfection in imperfection.
this is so absorbing.....Neville.
j.

[Neville]

Blimey jacob sir.. I am truly honoured and then some I can tell ya, but can't thank you enough..
read moreBlimey jacob sir.. I am truly honoured and then some I can tell ya, but can't thank you enough..

N.

[Mrudula Rani]

Flawed and beautiful very real human being that holds your interest? ... curiosity? You still care for this person you thought you knew well. Tender sentiments expressed bewitchingly, Neville.

[Neville]

Thank you my dear friend a most appreciated visit and indeed, then some.. Neville :)