Much More of a Blindness

Much More of a Blindness

 

My word

My fine friends

What do we

Have here

 

Much more of

A moreness

And sadness

And tears

 

Pray tell

Me my friends

What is it

You fear

 

More of the

Sameness

And blindness

My dears

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I love this can i say that more more more no probably wont reflect on how much i love this okay Last Sunday for my 50th birthday my friend baked me chocolate chip cookies I have a weakness for her cookies i would give her my car for a bag of her cookies I set 7 of them in a baggie next to my computer and they didn't last a day in fact i just ate the last one as i'm typing this I like this poem more than those cookies I am saving this and favoriting this I love what it says so very much good sir P.S. I put the other cookies in the freezer to prevent accidental impulsive overdose

[Neville]

I am well and truly blown away and feel so honoured by your most encouraging and heartwarming note Bad b.. thank you ever so much and belated birthday best to you my Friend... Neville :)

[Fay Slimm]

The feel of hard truths hiding in words weighs on this reader -- using more than plain moreness gives the reason for fear that sameness results in more blindness -- -- imagery maybe but I am still left near tears - - a powerful verse and writ by a mind which speaks much between lines. This has to be one of your most arresting of poems Nev........................ ......... Fay.

[Neville]

Thank you my dear Fay.. I am seldom sure just how much of a gap to leave between each line.. there is after all, only so much one can squeeze into a confined space..... N :)

[Aurora]

Done wisely and so.......

[Neville]

Why thank you kindly Aurora.. a much appreciated visit and always welcome..... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Sometimes moreness can be welcome at other times not so. When I read this little poem, I kept thinking of balance in our lives. You can have too much of a good thing which is bad for you and you can have too much of a bad thing which is equally bad. Striking a balance is always wise. Sometimes though we can be blind to it all. Good morning Neville.

[Neville]

wise words and true.. thank you

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome. Have a good day.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of our country right now...more sadness, more blindness...more tears...and no change...no fight in us to change things...
j.

[Neville]

my word, how terribly sad is that... fingers well and truly crossed my friend... and thank you for stopping by .. your visits are always welcome and appreciated... Neville

[kentuck14]

What goes around comes around! I guess in my growing years I try to look for the different . . . tired of the same old, same old!! keeps me going!!
T

[Neville]

nowt wrong with that... enjoy while ya still can ... and thanks... Neville