Dirty Margarita

Delicious...

Dirty Margarita

 

At first the three

Green olives

Threw me slightly

 

Whereas the

Salt caked rim was

Usually a dead giveaway

 

Forget fake news

Tonight

We are talking forgery

 

Right now tho my second

Dirty Margarita is going down

Far too fast and hard on me

 

 

Author's Note

I made this one up, or rather it was made for me in error in a Bulgarian cocktail bar.. A corrupted version of an old favourite, but a version I now much prefer.. why not give it a try........ all rights reserved & please... drink sensibly... N

Reviews

[Sammi]

Oh Neville it sounds delicious but i can't drink a lot I get too willing and everything for my own good I have been told but I love that title name for this poem, you are so good a writer and very creative in how your words entertain and make me feel happy sort of tipsy in fact like dancing lol I better quit while i am still on my feet -- a 100 on this one! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Neville]

You are far too kind Sammi.. but do ya hear me complaining.. of course not.. Bless ya and true...

[barleygirl]

A dirty margarita sounds great! I just love how you make this sound (in poem & also in authors notes) like the damn drink surprisingly seduced you! Once again, your amazing approach brings the inanimate alive! (((MUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Bless ya Margie & (JUGS) to ya fondly ... :)N

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

A forgery with strong spirits immortalized! Great title, intro and poetic tribute to “Dirty” Margaritas. Those two olives cause all the trouble Neville! But they’re so much better than fake news..

[Neville]

Thank you ever so much Annette and true... tis a funny old world when fake news makes the headlines innit.... am smiling big in your direction

Neville :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes life is like this...goes down to easily and we bask in the moment like chugging a cocktail...
could i have a third, please?

[Neville]

cheers sir, down ya neck & much appreciated so you are.... N

[Wondering Mind]

Sounds delicious.
I learned the hard way never to call a Margarita dirty!!

[Neville]

sounds like you got what you asked for...mine was handed to me on a tray ... cheers anyway

[Wondering Mind]

Well, we live and learn..
Cheers

[Neville]

absolutely.... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Clever write. The mind drifts on to other things. I'm quite partial to cocktails, hence the mention of alabama slammers in one of my recent poems. . Have you tried sex on the beach? That's another one.

Chris

[Neville]

I have never had the cocktail no .. but thank you for asking and for checking in today Chris... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Neville. Good morning to you.