Remarkably Unfinished

Remarkably Unfinished

 

 

Discover me

She said

Then celebrate

Each

Find you make

Along

The way and

Mark them

With a x

Oh’ yes she said

Explore

And contemplate

Each

Rise and fall

Each turn and curve

Each

Cleft and crease

And subtle dip

Examine me

With fingertips

And eyes and lips

Then

Let me go and freely

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

How sensual this is. I found myself following those fingertips, eyes and lips. Such close scrutiny and then the end lines. This dame is not for taming. She will not be caged. Free as our avian friends to roam and land when and where she pleases.

Chris

[Neville]

she was precisely like that and I did love her so....Thank you Chris..

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

A poem of memory and not of imagination. I'm sure she loved you too in her own free spirit way. Like a butterfly she couldn't settle, off to pastures new.

[Neville]

Almost, she died

[Chris Shaw]

Sad ending on both accounts :((

[lightsong]

The Naughty N was at work, and here comes the result, I find the title really brilliant, You always chose those titles perfectly. an untamed, seductive and passionate woman what is needed to light the heart of the man and burn it high, with no control wanting to discover the ongoing more of Her. well me thinks that :)

[Neville]

What a super way of looking at and beyond my words here dear friend...… The naughty N blushes brightly and thanks thee .. N :)

[Lorry]

Your X's, her Oh's...... So who won at noughts and crosses then? Enquiring minds want to know, otherwise people might think this is about... Oh! 😜

[Neville]

Am I that transparent .. seems you can see write through me, whereas I can hardly see a bloomin thing .. back to the hosp for me it seems... N x

[Lorry]

What a downer that must be mate. Had eye drops a while back that made everything blurry for the rest of the day and that wasa nightmare, so having problems longer term must be driving you barmy.
You'd think in this day and age there'd be an app to sort it. C'MON BOFFINS, GET THYFINGER OUT!

[Neville]

Cheers....

Neville

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with desire and an offer no man would refuse. Sensual to the nth degree, Neville. Seems as though the one you write of wants no ties though....love em and leave em! Good write. Lydi**

[Neville]

Thank you Lydi**.. this goes back a long way and is far more complicated than it may seem... one for another day maybe..... x