Global Warning
A Poem by Neville
Global Warning
The moon was
Roughly
Blown off kilter
Like a silver white
Balloon
Torn free from a
Young child’s hand
Still clutching
Like
Some perfect sphere
Or silver florin
Floating
Slow but high
Across the skies
Elsewhere
A child
Is now crying huge
Pre-spring tears
Each hauled from a
Dew pit overflowing
© 2020 Neville
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"...Like a silver white
Balloon
Torn free from a
Young child’s hand
Still clutching..."
how can anyone read these specific words without being touched into their child core? tenderly, magically and sad... when You see how the world from before and now has changed, and in the same time, when You see how in this now world, under the same sky and the same moon, a child is smiling here living the innocent dream, while in another place another one is crying as his dream and pureness were torn and stolen.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
thank you so very much my luverly Friend.. what incredible insight and kindness you bestow upon thos.. read morethank you so very much my luverly Friend.. what incredible insight and kindness you bestow upon those whose words You visit... Blessings and all Good Things, Your friend,
Neville
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5 Years Ago
You humble me with Your kindness dear Neville, Thanking You with all the good and beautiful things ð.. read moreYou humble me with Your kindness dear Neville, Thanking You with all the good and beautiful things 🌸🌺🌼🌷🦋🌷🌸🌺🌼
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"...Like a silver white
Balloon
Torn free from a
Young child’s hand
Still clutching..."
how can anyone read these specific words without being touched into their child core? tenderly, magically and sad... when You see how the world from before and now has changed, and in the same time, when You see how in this now world, under the same sky and the same moon, a child is smiling here living the innocent dream, while in another place another one is crying as his dream and pureness were torn and stolen.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
thank you so very much my luverly Friend.. what incredible insight and kindness you bestow upon thos.. read morethank you so very much my luverly Friend.. what incredible insight and kindness you bestow upon those whose words You visit... Blessings and all Good Things, Your friend,
Neville
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5 Years Ago
You humble me with Your kindness dear Neville, Thanking You with all the good and beautiful things ð.. read moreYou humble me with Your kindness dear Neville, Thanking You with all the good and beautiful things 🌸🌺🌼🌷🦋🌷🌸🌺🌼
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and if we aren't careful...the warming will preclude the younger generation from being around to watch those balloons fly.
well written warning here, Neville. The last five lines hit the reader especially hard...that
"dew pit overflowing"
j.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
I really cant thank you enough Jacob sir.. I am not surprised that you read me so well, just.. read more
I really cant thank you enough Jacob sir.. I am not surprised that you read me so well, just want you to know that your visits are invariably appreciated and muchly....
Neville
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Added on March 2, 2020
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NevilleGone West folks....., United Kingdom
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