The Eleventh Hour

The Eleventh Hour

 

Appearing out of nowhere

Like a morning star so rare

 

To guide each step

Along the way precarious

 

Once in time she was indeed

A beacon of perfection

 

Tho having reached

Some unplanned destination

 

Safe atop some hidden causeway

Prayers were said in celebration

 

Until the rescuers they did come

And they were rescued every single one  

 

Reviews

[poetgurl]

Very creative and well said. Nicely penned

[Neville]

thank you friend...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a positive note amid the chaos...and in the 12th hour, the ashes of those not saved in time, burn in the memories of those who remain.
powerful,
j.

[Neville]

Cheers Jacob … much appreciated as always my fine literary friend...

N.

[Fay Slimm]

Those on that causeway hidden away did not want any rescuing from the beacon of perfection in this world of qualified order methinks.......... another intrigue of a read......... and bloomin' impressive 'tis Nev.

[Neville]

Thanks Fay and truly my dear Kernow Friend :)