Pinned

Pinned

 

She could

Hardly wait

To throw

Herself

Headfirst

Into her

New gown

Never mind

The pins

Therein

They were a

Magnificent

Bonus

She just lived

To be hurt

Reviews

[Rye]

hurting stinks so bad, This is well expressed. sad write.

[Neville]

thank you for considering these words...

Neville

[Anjeline]

You have very wisely expressed the sad and strange reality of some people. I too had a relative of this sort and she met a sad end too. I truly believe that such people need both medical and family support so they can get over such behavior

[Neville]

Tis a funny old sad old world and true... Bless ya dear Anjeline for just being you....

[Fay Slimm]

Wanting pain seems to fashionable in certain domains - you verse it with first rate imagery too Nev........ a familiar need of those who feel un-loved - ? well perhaps.......... sometimes maybe..........x

[Neville]

it seems to be trending Fay.... maybe x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have a friend who is like this...seems to live for drama, lives to be hurt and won't change that gown for anything, and adds pins along the way.
j.

[Neville]

there's a lot of it about jacob and sadly, on the increase... I'm on my third call today..

N.

[Neville]

sorry.. I meant to say thanks for visiting ..

[Chris Shaw]

Yes ouch. I've come across a few who were happy to inflict hurt on themselves. Really sad. When I first saw pins in your lines, I couldn't help thinking about legs. Isn't it strange how the mind works. Good afternoon Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

there's a lot more of it about than meets the eye.. thank you Chris & Good Afternoon.

Neville

[Robert Trakofler]

ouch I get enough pin pricks testing my blood sugar LOL no need to wear them:/ I know a few people like this tho not enough band aids in the world to fix those people yet I still try tis the medic in me:/ always trying to fix even when the fixee isn't interested in healing! brilliant poetry as always good sir and not a bad poem either

[poetgurl]

it's sad when when you live to be hurt over and over again. Powerful read really. Nicely done.

[Neville]

Absolutely true...
Many thank you's Ang-X
Neville

[poetgurl]

not a problem