Of Kept Men & Their Secrets

Of Kept Men & Their Secrets

 

Listen to

the hollow sound of

cracked church bell

The cry of

kittiwake cross

ocean’s swell ..

 

My word

and what a tale

she tells, of kept men

and their secrets ..

 

Take note tho’

for she, my friend

is yet the kind of crazy

that never once

failed to drive men wild ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Crazy appetite those women, insatiable. Reminds me of the preying mantis. Once she's had what she needs, she'll bite your head off then move on. What a way to die though. My other half has always said, he'd risk one eye. Every bloke's fantasy and set beside the intrigue and swell of the ocean's curves and those mad gulls taking a gander at the goings on. Cracked church bells? Now you've got me thinking about the clergy. Now some of them have the best secrets of all. What you've packed into this write Neville is the setting for a film. I see it now. You are quite an expert at saying so much in so little space.

Chris

[Neville]

Tell him nothing is worth taking that kind of risk for ... but I thank you tho for sharing and for lots of other things besides :)

Neville

[Papaya]

"Crazy" is attractive. Something about the fun and spontaneity. The fearless and uninhibited joy.
That pace can't be sustained but it's at least a damn good time even if it doesn't last for a long time.

[Neville]

I quite agree Ana.. when used appropriately, with sensitivity, crazy can be a very attractive word.. I am glad that you picked up on this ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have known these women....we know they are crazy but we don't care because they are so alluring and somehow we become like a fly caught in a web of happy death.
j.

[Neville]

that is certainly the way to go jacob :) oh' and thanks for pausing to peruse me scribble sir..

N.