Pretty as a Pin

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Pretty as a Pin

 

As the night again draws in

she wears a cotton lace cap

o’er golden rag tied hair

...

Pretty as a brand-new pin

she was, tween courtesy, bow

and sheepish grin

…

And curly too by heck

just in time for breakfast sin

whey hey ..

…

She coyly called to him

come take me Horatio where

the bloody hell ya bin ….

 

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha who can resist the coquettish young thing ... so many thing i like about this .. from the cotton lace cap ... to the "whey hey" of the hearty young sailor https://youtu.be/kwhz87ciA1c ;) i think your poem gives fresh new inspiration to "pretty as a pin" ... what a wake up! .. playful and romantic says i! very much enjoyed the scene and exchange of the characters ..
E.

[Neville]

Thanking you aint hard at all our Gene .. whey hey and blow the man down.. Cheers too my friend and truly :)

[AJNJ]

This is a such a sensual poem, sir. Felt really good to read. A good lovin is welcome anytime of the day!

[Neville]

tis true about the lovin anyway... :) smilz sir PJ

................. Neville

[AJNJ]

:)))))))))))

[Lorry]

I do believe the ghost of Frankie Howard voiced this in my head Neville. All ooh, err and wide eyed stare of innocence to camera. "What! No, not me sir. Can barely afford a single entendre at these prices Sir!"
Which reminds me, must watch up Pompei again 😀

[Neville]

.......... spooky or what.. I was beginning to think I was possessed .. but am glad tis only you that got me back covered .... 😀 x

[Robert Trakofler]

LOL wherefore art thou Horatio? Hey why doesn’t this ever happen to me?

[Neville]

Are you kiddin you Bad Bunny you ..... :))))

[Fay Slimm]

Sin-before-breakfast sounds naughty but nice but oh that sticky night-long rag-tied hair - t'would put off any but Horatio-fellas methinks - ha ha -what a fun read as the first of my day mi amigo........ more please ..................x

[Neville]

My word, I am honoured that out of 3,4472266572 you chose this little scribble to read first over breakfast... bless ya dear Fay .... x

[Fay Slimm]

My pleasure as ever and true.................x

[Chris Shaw]

This is a fun poem . Good old bawdy humour. The rag curlers reminded me of my Nan. She used to comb her hair with sugar water and then use rag rollers, wrap her head up in a scarf. God knows how she managed to get any sleep. Come morning her dead straight hair was a mass of curls. I hope Ernie my Grandad, appreciated the efforts. Horatio, just love that name. I am sure he enjoyed his early morning romp with a bit of strumpet :)) Got their day off to a good start.

Chris

[Neville]

Can't beat a bit o fun can ya eh' ... I usually start mine off these days with a bowl of porridge :)

[Chris Shaw]

And mine is a very tasty bowl of nutty cornflakes with blueberries if I am lucky:) Not like the old days eh? You didn't need a bowl of anything then just a ........

[Neville]

I ..... love it when ya dot me dirty :)

[Chris Shaw]

... couple of tablets to cure the hangover :))

[Neville]

not had a hangover for yonks ... have a job to raise an eyebrow some daze :)

[Chris Shaw]

Hangovers are for the young, not old farts like us:)

[Neville]

phew... glad I never had a drink while typing out my last response :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Neville.. I love the language you use when
describing romantic moments... especially the last line. I have been doing it all wrong in my
“Neck of the woods”. tenderly, Pat

[Neville]

there is no wrong way... but gentleness is an absolute must... thank you Pat.. N :)

[Patricia Wedel]

we also need a healthy sense of humor... and be thankful for the Freedoms we have and do what we can to preserve our privileges. Thanks for your generosity.
Be well and safe. Gently, Pat

[Neville]

............ and you too Pat :)