Blue Light

Blue Light

A Poem by Neville

Blue Light

 

Thanks to the blue light

She missed the vein in her arm

By a stroke of luck

 

© 2020 Neville


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Why am I seeing the crisis team in action? Maybe because I saw my daughter yesterday, but this is where this senryu takes me. It takes me to mental health workers and their tireless work to save lost souls and my girl is one of them. Blue emergency lights flashing here. I've seen enough of them. Powerful piece. Evokes strong emotion.

But then I see other things to do with blue lights and their power too.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


I really do appreciate your several takes on this little nipper .. if you have no objection... read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I don't encourage pm's Neville but have to say you are an exception so feel free....... Always inter.. read more



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Why am I seeing the crisis team in action? Maybe because I saw my daughter yesterday, but this is where this senryu takes me. It takes me to mental health workers and their tireless work to save lost souls and my girl is one of them. Blue emergency lights flashing here. I've seen enough of them. Powerful piece. Evokes strong emotion.

But then I see other things to do with blue lights and their power too.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


I really do appreciate your several takes on this little nipper .. if you have no objection... read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I don't encourage pm's Neville but have to say you are an exception so feel free....... Always inter.. read more

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Added on October 1, 2020
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..