Attrition

Attrition

A Poem by Neville
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................. Lest we forget

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Attrition

 

He wore them

until he wore them out completely …

 

Only then did he break them

but he did not break them cleanly …

 

That, is the true nature of war

regardless of what they try and teach you ….

 

 

 


© 2020 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
........................................ this is a gentle reminder

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I see how attrition applies to war, but your thought-provoking words brought many things to my mind. First, I'm afraid people might lose the will to fight onward, given all the demoralizing things we struggle against these days. Second, in Washington DC they're fighting against the attrition of steady covid infections as they try to jam thru whatever agenda they think will win them 4 more years in the White House. Last but not least, I'm reminded of how we used to use things until they wore out, but nowadays, it's fashionable to get rid of anything clearly "dated" (like maybe us old farts who make up 80% of covid deaths). You didn't write very much, but you say so much! (((LUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


It is without doubt a whole new world BG .. a purchase and discard me me me mentality and wi.. read more



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Has the sound of General Grant at the Siege of Petersburg.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


........... I dunno please enlighten me
John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Grant conducted a war of attrition against Lee in 1864-65. He knew he could lose 3 men to every 1 Le.. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago


I was aware of the slaughter & have seen some horrific old war correspondent photo's of the .. read more
War is hell, I believe someone more associated with cleverology than I once said, but lived my youth when elder family were reaching the end of theirs, at least the parts that weren't left on bloodied battlefields.
Touching and accurate words of how those who made it out never really made it out, returning shadows of their formal selves.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago


.. Cor blimey guv'nor I am so glad you are on my side .. Cheers again Loz
this reminds me of friends I knew who came back from Viet Nam...broken.
The war was over for them, but only physically...mentally and emotionally they were unable
to put the pieces back together.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


Thank you for the kind words and understanding jacob.. always appreciated sir

.. read more
Three little couplets, yet so much to glean from your words. I remember attrition in the work place and then there's the continual grinding down effect that some people can have on others. However most of all I see this in a warfare setting. I see how it happened in the trenches. Continual bombardment, driving soldiers to madness I would think. Relentless torture. Yes reminds me how ugly warfare is and how stupid our Leaders can be. No one wins in war. An excellent little piece of brevity Neville.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I know you do, but the answers still the same......
Neville

5 Years Ago


................................. :)
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Aren't we good at knitting scarves :))
Hit it Neville.
What was it Steinbeck said 'All war is a symptom of man's failure as a thinker'
This covers so much ground with many layers. Excellent piece that continues the readers thinking beyond.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


.... Here sits a delighted man .. thank you Ken and truly

Neville
I see how attrition applies to war, but your thought-provoking words brought many things to my mind. First, I'm afraid people might lose the will to fight onward, given all the demoralizing things we struggle against these days. Second, in Washington DC they're fighting against the attrition of steady covid infections as they try to jam thru whatever agenda they think will win them 4 more years in the White House. Last but not least, I'm reminded of how we used to use things until they wore out, but nowadays, it's fashionable to get rid of anything clearly "dated" (like maybe us old farts who make up 80% of covid deaths). You didn't write very much, but you say so much! (((LUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


It is without doubt a whole new world BG .. a purchase and discard me me me mentality and wi.. read more

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Added on October 5, 2020
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