Somewhere Between Trees

Somewhere Between Trees

A Poem by Neville

Somewhere Between Trees


Somewhere

En route between

Points A and B

 ...

Our path was still

golden and seemingly

littered with sovereigns

 ...

Though some

might just as well

have been leaves …

 ...

Yes, somewhere

en route and just a

few steps between trees …

 


© 2020 Neville


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One sovereign to a poor man would be considered great wealth. There was more than one sovereign here. Gold is gold regardless and should be valued for its worth. I think you had treasure here. Beautiful moments I would say. Wonderful imagery here in this lovely poem.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


....... thank you kindly Chris & thank you true .

Neville



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Your poem is a reminder for us to see all the ways our paths are littered with gold, & not just whine about shortcomings & blame & what's not to our liking. Your brief lesson is much needed in the USA. As weird as life has been in recent years here, it's still a blessing to live in this country (((BOON))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


Thanks BG ... Let's get this covid thing outa the way and I reckon you lot will soon be on t.. read more
A phase fleeting yet golden...In retrospect, totally worth it, despite the briefness. The memories of that short trek between trees still perfectly glowing though a bit wistfully. But I'd say totally worth it sir! Golden always is!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago


.............. thank you AJ .. for a moment, this pilgrim was a multi-millionaire :)
dearest Neville... somewhere between trees are golden leaves ... sovereigns to me... rich as can be... when winter winds sing and birds are on wing... I will capture the gold like a leprechaun waiting for Spring. tenderly, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


................ I can picture it now .. my eyes are smiling .. thank you Pat :)

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One sovereign to a poor man would be considered great wealth. There was more than one sovereign here. Gold is gold regardless and should be valued for its worth. I think you had treasure here. Beautiful moments I would say. Wonderful imagery here in this lovely poem.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago


....... thank you kindly Chris & thank you true .

Neville

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..